Poverty

(07/07/2011) How can this poverty stabs my family? Fate and destiny, Do they exist to mess my life only? Such a huge responsibility here I carry As you all may see I just want to break free, then freed

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Guneet Singh

Date: 7/14/2011 10:30:00 PM

i think you have been going through all this alike me. great observation and amazingly crafted poem.

James Foulk

Date: 7/11/2011 11:58:00 AM

yes a very strong write, letting your feelings flow.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2011 8:41:00 AM

a racing kind of rant so wonderfully crafted, dinardi... greeat work! :) huggs, nette

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/7/2011 12:28:00 PM

Strong write again my Poet friend... tough words to feel and write.... btw your comment on Magic LOve was hotter then the poem lol.... stay well my dear....always Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2011 10:31:00 AM

What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us Dinda. Love, Carol

Hemi Lewis

Date: 7/7/2011 10:24:00 AM

i hear the rice deepness of your words