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Postmortem Observations On a Very Old Cat

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My 17 year old cat finally came to his end; I can't say I don't miss him, foolish as it is.

You wore your neuroses Like badges of Honor: A Non-Apology creature, - Like certain Candidates I know - Never a trip to the Vet's; I valued the flesh of my arms too much - And never outside; Except to eat grass And throw up inside, And despite it all, A life stubbornly lived Into profound old age; Most of it spent asleep. - This is your legacy; of which I'm sure you were perversely proud. And thus, one day After 17 years of pure existence You passed on while climbing the stairs. Maybe one day I'll follow, Slipping away between My lower and upper worlds; Halted midway between Past and Present. Maybe we'll meet one day in the middle, Old friend; Never think no one greives for Thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/20/2016 5:05:00 PM
What a lovely tribute to your beloved pet:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2016 6:08:00 PM
William, this is a sweet tribute to your feline friend. 17 years is a long time for a cat. He sounds like my cat, so independent and neurotic, too. He was only 13 when he passed a month ago. I sure miss him. I enjoyed your poem, and I'm sorry for your loss. Blessings!
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