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Poseidon's Child

I long to breathe the ocean air and feel the sea breeze in my hair, I long to sit and watch the tides, the ocean waves that mesmerize. To see the ocean's colors change as storms roll in, dark clouds and rain. The gulls embrace the rising winds and so, the bird ballet begins. Angry waves now rear their heads, the ocean swells like molten lead. At dawn, the sea is topaz-souled, with rills of silver, crests of gold. The twelfth house rules my sun and moon, my eyes the hue of lost lagoons, Poseidon's child, I need to be where I belong, beside the sea. ©Danielle White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/11/2009 9:06:00 AM
again this is truly a very brilliant write...true talent...Luke
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Date: 3/7/2009 10:21:00 AM
Perfect rhythm and rhyme. Vince
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Date: 3/4/2009 8:50:00 AM
Dear Danielle - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Laura's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:20:00 PM
Danielle this poem is very beautifully written with excellent Rhyme and flow - Congratulations on your third place win in Laura's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/3/2009 6:28:00 PM
A beautiful write, congrats on your win.. spirit and soul, constance
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Date: 3/3/2009 3:27:00 AM
A wonderful poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/2/2009 10:37:00 PM
COngrats... wondeful write.. ~ Arany
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Date: 3/2/2009 12:47:00 PM
I enjoy the identification with the ocean on this poem, Danielle; you and the waves must feed each other on a regular basis! Wonderful expressions and word selections here: congrats on your worthy win on Laura McKenzie's "Love for the Ocean" contest! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 3/2/2009 11:40:00 AM
Such a lovely entry, Danielle! Congratulations on your winning poem! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/2/2009 11:21:00 AM
So beautiful Danielle! Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/25/2009 9:53:00 AM
Absolutely lovely! The flow and rhyme are perfect as they put me there by the sea as well. Excellent writing. Michael
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:29:00 AM
Makes me miss living on the coast... :(
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