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Poor Percy acted like a schmuck I guess he was down on his luck He looked quite a sight His pants were too tight He waddled around like a duck 18th May 2016

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/28/2016 11:54:00 PM

Be careful Jan, you might find the ducks are upset - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2016 5:57:00 PM

lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/21/2016 11:10:00 PM

haha :-) chuckles more !!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:29:00 PM

Thanks so much Lenny:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2016 1:29:00 PM

Excellent, Jan; witty and with flowing meter. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:29:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul I am working hard to find good ones for the book:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/20/2016 10:46:00 AM

Hi Jan, Lol! You really are the limerick "Queen". Nice picture too. Well done- Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2016 12:30:00 PM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2016 9:04:00 PM

haha. love the picture you put with it.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2016 12:29:00 PM

I had to tone done from the one I really wanted to post lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 5/19/2016 4:02:00 PM

I could lend him my CORSET as it doesn't fit me anymore.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:14:00 PM

lol Jean must be all that good food when you were on holiday:-) hugs Jan xx

Archontoula Alexandropoulou

Date: 5/19/2016 3:10:00 PM

It's capital! really!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 3:23:00 PM

Thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 5/19/2016 3:09:00 PM

Hilarious, I can picture Percy!thanks Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 3:23:00 PM

Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/18/2016 9:09:00 PM

LOL, another great limerick! Now I except nothing less! ( and from what I saw here, a lot more! ) LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 1:31:00 AM

Progress for the book is slow atm Arthur hope my muse picks up:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/18/2016 6:12:00 PM

LOL...he needs the prego pants with elastic

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 1:30:00 AM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/18/2016 9:08:00 PM

I do not!!!

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 5/18/2016 6:03:00 PM

:-) :-) That's what happens trying to wear "skinny jeans!" :-) :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2016 6:04:00 PM

LOL Walter:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 5/18/2016 5:50:00 PM

What I meant to say was that none of his food was wasted but rather waisted.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2016 5:53:00 PM

ha ha ha clever play on words there Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 5/18/2016 5:42:00 PM

ha, ha, ha. Excellent, Jan. All of his food apparently went to waist.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2016 5:45:00 PM

Most definitely Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx