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Polaice

Polaice (Freyja) her eyes the sunrise the colour of northern green queen of Viking dreams brings tears of amber and gold in fields where warriors lie. ©Harry J Horsman 2016

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Date: 6/1/2017 10:04:00 AM
Nice Tanka mate, that 4th line is fabulous.
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Date: 7/31/2016 4:38:00 AM
I am not familiar with her, but just by reading your tanka, I am given a pretty good depiction of her and can imagine this strong, radiant beauty. I really like your description of her eyes...it was so nice to see your name in my inbox, Harry. How are you? I hope all is great with you and thank you for passing by....
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Date: 7/14/2016 1:22:00 PM
Freyja,the lady is a Goddess believed to be of war too . Wonderfully done in poetic style. Loved always my lovely genius friend, bl
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Date: 7/12/2016 9:09:00 AM
Harry, this is a beauty.. lovely and so descriptive :)
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Date: 7/6/2016 5:10:00 PM
Here again to swoon over this amazing tanka. I'm back, and thanks for reading my poetry, harry.
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Date: 7/6/2016 2:02:00 PM
Her eyes the sunrise! Nice line! Thank you for your feedback! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/3/2016 5:52:00 PM
I can feel the emotion of this one..Great expressive and descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/2/2016 6:57:00 PM
What a great poem, I really liked this, love legends and you depicted this so eloquently.
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Date: 7/2/2016 5:24:00 PM
oh,I love this one, Harry - have always enjoyed Norse legends
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Date: 7/2/2016 2:14:00 PM
how you flow with such languid lines, such pathos, harry!... huggs
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Date: 7/2/2016 1:43:00 PM
I had to read Kiram's comments. Nice work, Harry. Love, daver
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Date: 7/2/2016 8:51:00 AM
- With few words .... a beauty .... a work of art - I wish you a lovely weekend, Harry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/2/2016 8:49:00 AM
Queen of the Valkyries so beautifully described. Always loved the Norse pantheon. ~karam~
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Date: 6/30/2016 7:20:00 AM
So much in so few words. Tantalising the mind. Love it.
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Date: 6/29/2016 11:05:00 PM
this is beautiful, my friend (If you don't hear from me in next several days after Thursday, I am in Oregon then visiting my son!)
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Date: 6/29/2016 8:03:00 PM
Nice Tanka, I had no idea Polaice was another name for Freyja!
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Date: 6/29/2016 1:19:00 PM
This is beautiful, Harry! Freya can easily inspire my dreams, too! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/29/2016 2:38:00 AM
This is good you express thing so well harry you are legend xx
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Date: 6/28/2016 5:38:00 PM
such wonderful imagery Harry a delight to read:-) hugs jan xx
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