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Pointless

Money got lost. Everyone screaming. What use is my input?

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Dan Kearley

Date: 1/14/2013 3:16:00 PM

Ha,ha...Very well put. Thanks for stopping by.I will look forward to more of your fine writes. :o)

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/13/2013 12:20:00 AM

Nice Questionku Iveren! Thoughts to do with purpose and worth are the most difficult to tackle. Well penned!

Iveren Ikyembe
Date: 1/14/2013 6:22:00 AM

Thanks a lot Vicky

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/10/2013 12:40:00 PM

Thanks for trying out my new form. Excellent work on very first try. You may want to do each sentance as a seperate line for visual affect. Your sylable count for each sentance is perfect.

Iveren Ikyembe
Date: 1/11/2013 1:56:00 AM

Thanks.i'll keep that in mind

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/9/2013 10:55:00 AM

Who knows? Only the Shadow knows for sure! ;) Light & Love

Iveren Ikyembe
Date: 1/9/2013 11:13:00 PM

Lol!