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She was a beauty Rollerskating was the rage Falling so often Traversing the oval pattern in ungainly fashion Just to prove to her that I had a manly passion. She, however, did not take my failures on the floor too kindly...jilting me While her older, wiser, sister helped me through that night of terror. Her sister took me by the hand and showed me the way. Without speaking a word she shared her courage with me, As around that floor she led me on my legs of clay. So many firsts that night still hearken to me First Date... First Skate... First Women... to be etched in my memory.

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Date: 1/17/2016 1:06:00 AM
Congrats Dan, loved it...Seren
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/20/2016 4:19:00 PM
Thanks, Seren. I appreciate your stopping to read and you comments. Glad you liked it!
Date: 1/16/2016 7:25:00 PM
Dan, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/16/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. This date poem was a winner, but the date was not. lol I appreciate your stopping to read it and your comments. ((BIG HUGS)) Dan
Date: 1/14/2016 11:17:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/15/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thanks, Funom. I appreciate your stopping to read it your comments very much.
Date: 1/14/2016 7:40:00 AM
Dan, I can imagine the first one.. =`) I see congrats below.. =`) the title is catchy!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/15/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thanks, Olive. I hope you didn't do this to someone on your first date.
Date: 1/10/2016 11:58:00 AM
Enjoyed this one, Dan. Congrats on the placement
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/11/2016 7:29:00 AM
Thanks, David. I am sure some others have had similar experiences.
Date: 1/9/2016 6:44:00 PM
I would say you had a really great first date. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/10/2016 1:57:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce. It certainly didn't feel like it at the time. It almost put me off dates entirely...ALMOST. lol I appreciate your reading and comments.
Date: 1/9/2016 3:43:00 PM
Dan, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/10/2016 1:53:00 AM
Thanks, SKAT. I did not expect it for this one.
Date: 1/7/2016 2:02:00 PM
What a night! Love hurts, huh? I'm grinning. I hope you entered the contest. I was able to see and 'feel' your first date ... CayCay
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:20:00 PM
Not so much love as the peer pressure of getting a date for the first time. I liked the girl very much, but was a long way from love at the age of 16. She had no qualms about going home with someone else, though. Had it not been for her older sister, I would have probably been scared of girls to this day. lol It has been entered, so we'll see. Thanks for the read, CayCay.

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