Get Your Premium Membership

Poetry On My Poetry

Over the years emotions became my muse Dealing with Wayne’s death was my mother’s bequeath Putting a knack for writing poems to good use I found light following these shadows of death “Mother’s Empty Room” was the first poem I wrote Looking back I see a lot of cliché quotes Word’s shedding pain flowing from my finger tips Now I’m able to write a few silly quips Written 01/12/13 For Russel’s “Poetry about Poetry” members contest Form: Rispetto, with ababccdd rhyme, 8 lines with 11 syllables each line.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/3/2013 4:51:00 PM
Writing ais so cathartic both for the writer and the reader, Thanks for all you share.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2013 7:13:00 PM
congrats :-) SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2013 5:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Debra!! Jag
Login to Reply
Date: 1/17/2013 2:56:00 PM
Yes, it's a release that we can write our emotions down, I started keep diaries around age 16 and poetry same time. Now I must read "Mothers Empty Room"
Login to Reply
Date: 1/14/2013 4:45:00 PM
Reflections of our own request. Looking back at what was best. We learn to take it all in stride. As we travel on this poetic ride. :/ :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/14/2013 9:13:00 AM
Great penned Debra, and sorry for your lost, thank you for share such a beautiful poem and encoraged me through a warm greets in my pages :) - hug, yanny
Login to Reply
Date: 1/13/2013 1:14:00 PM
i started writing after my Dad's death...Word's shedding pain.....oh!! i can totally identify with that...thanks for ur visit..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/13/2013 9:34:00 AM
Not silly at all! On the contrary your writing is superb and your expressions marvelous. Keep poetry flowing and feeling keeping your heart warm! Thank you!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/12/2013 9:55:00 PM
I can't recall if I have seen mother's empty room poem of yours? This makes me want to check it out!!!
Login to Reply
Squyres Avatar
Debra Squyres
Date: 1/13/2013 12:27:00 PM
I will have to look it up and post...it's not very good, but it is dear to my heart.

Book: Shattered Sighs