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Come my beauty, I am the voice of the forest, Just take my mossy hand and come my dearest; With love you will be embraced by emerald vines, Listen to the birds sing, oh what a sweet chorus. And in ancient towering trees the wild wind whines, On hanging branches tangled moss falls and twines; Let us take this path, see the sage unfolding ferns, Not far, my dear, a creek bubbles like sweet chimes. Come my darling, be careful of those wild rose thorns, A colorful bright hummingbird twirls, swirls and turns; To hear my whisper, that has always been your "choice", I know you love me, since childhood this love burns. The forest is within your heart and I am the sweet voice, And in your dream dear, I called and you came by choice; You love my green deepness, my peace, and tranquility, So until it is time to wake, be still and just rejoice. __________________________ April 30, 2016 Poetry/Rubaiyat/Forest Copyright Protected, ID 16-784-237-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Poetry (Fill in the Blank) sponsor, Poet Destroyer Third Place

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Date: 5/18/2016 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful, divine, brilliant, whole..... Congrats BW, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/17/2016 3:35:00 PM
Love the call of the forest. Lovely!
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Date: 5/17/2016 7:21:00 AM
This certainly was a beautifully tranquil visit. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:38:00 PM
Enchanting...Congrats on a fine win BW
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:34:00 PM
Very beautiful write Constance and congrats on your placement
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Date: 5/16/2016 11:20:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely beautiful poetess friend. Earlier missed to read, sorry. Loved always, bl
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Constance La France
Date: 5/16/2016 12:09:00 PM
BL thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment and congratulations
Date: 5/16/2016 8:40:00 AM
So lovely and soothing, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 5/16/2016 10:01:00 AM
Sandra thanks for the beautiful comment and congratulations
Date: 5/16/2016 1:06:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome Poetry POEM win. Stop by my blog "POETRY THERAPY." if you'd like... Thank you always for being so supportive when it comes to my contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Constance La France
Date: 5/16/2016 10:04:00 AM
Linda thanks for the beautiful contest and for my wonderful placement
Date: 5/5/2016 2:32:00 PM
lovely write.. i see your imagery. 7 for sure
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Constance La France
Date: 5/5/2016 3:20:00 PM
James, thanks for the lovely and the 7 ~
Date: 5/4/2016 3:41:00 AM
Your imageries, emotions and words forever hold me spellbound, Constance!
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Date: 5/4/2016 12:39:00 PM
Balveen, thanks for visiting my poem today and for the nice comment
Date: 5/1/2016 3:09:00 PM
Beautiful... I should call you Ms. Omar Khayyam.
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Date: 6/6/2016 10:14:00 AM
Always my dear......you should try this more often. Come my beauty, I am the voice of the forest,........Pashang
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Constance La France
Date: 5/3/2016 11:25:00 PM
Pash, thanks for visiting with the beautiful
Date: 5/1/2016 1:52:00 PM
- Beautiful written B.W. ..... a 7 ! - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/3/2016 11:25:00 PM
Anne, thanks for the beautiful and hugs
Date: 5/1/2016 11:16:00 AM
Rather enjoyable piece Constance, great imagery and insightful thought too, well done!
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:26:00 PM
Gordon, thanks for the compliments !
Date: 5/1/2016 10:44:00 AM
This is wonderful BW. Ethereal and dreamy.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/3/2016 11:27:00 PM
James, I love those words ethereal and dreamy ~
Date: 5/1/2016 9:12:00 AM
Wow, so sensual. Beautiful written, definitely a 7.
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Date: 5/1/2016 10:04:00 AM
Barry, thanks for the compliment...
Date: 4/30/2016 9:23:00 PM
A beautiful forest to look at, listen, live in and love on....
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Constance La France
Date: 5/1/2016 9:08:00 AM
Probir, thanks for the beautiful and the comment ~

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