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Poetr-E For Dummies

Once, I think, you said to me That poets are like the sand in the sea But each grain plays a part in that ocean To set each wave in motion. Taste this Little oasis So you feel The appeal. Listen, my friend, to know what we are How writing, in rhythm, does take us far Every word takes our soul on vacation To the culture of a new nation We are open When broken For we know How to grow. Open your eyes, and you will see That though we are like sand in the sea Our work is parchment coated in emery, Every word a recorded memory.

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Date: 1/21/2019 4:01:00 AM
A creative, alphabetic, rhythmic, lexical gem of a rhyme. Well done Juli-.
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Date: 5/26/2017 8:35:00 AM
Love the shape. Enjoy the sentiment.
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Date: 9/23/2014 11:26:00 PM
"parchment coated in emery", I love that description.
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Date: 9/18/2014 9:58:00 AM
Beautifully done Juli! Love the E concrete shape! Love it! Cheers my friend! xxx D.
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Date: 9/17/2014 5:54:00 PM
E for Excellent! Well done.
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Date: 9/17/2014 4:16:00 PM
Another 7. Another great write.
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Date: 9/12/2014 11:25:00 AM
LOL, Juli-Michelle, I just love what you did here. The E-, in every poetr-E... I'm giving your poem a perfect 7. What would the sea be without us... A wonderful write...LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2014 8:59:00 AM
OK, I just read your poem now and WOW, I love your approach. I am seeing so many amazing poems about the story of poetry. Wish I could come up with a 'hook" for this one. It's a great topic.
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Date: 9/12/2014 8:58:00 AM
Hi, Julile. So nice hearing from you. So you will go into elementary ed? I graduated in a Spanish teaching major with ESL minor. This was eons ago. hahaha. Back before the 80's. So my teaching certificate finally expired from me not teaching in a "certified" ESL school. Now that my school has been certified, maybe I can get my certificate renewed again.I teach adults in a private school. Not very good pay but better than minimum wage at least!!
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Date: 9/12/2014 8:37:00 AM
Hi, Julie, Thanks for reading my stuff. This dummy likes your work. Yep. We are like "sand in the sea," But aint it wonderful when one considers others are forgotten - no one gives a damn after they're gone - but we leave your "recorded memory." I'll read much more of your work. Love, daver
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Date: 9/12/2014 8:00:00 AM
i smiled straight from the title excellent piece
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Date: 9/11/2014 3:40:00 PM
I like the shape of an E ...Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara
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Juli- Michelle
Date: 9/12/2014 7:49:00 AM
That was actually on purpose :) Glad you noticed! Thanks for visiting my page :)
Date: 9/11/2014 1:34:00 PM
Well done! I like this a lot.
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Date: 9/11/2014 1:10:00 PM
wow, julie... i like your word choices as each line brings forth the grandeur of poetry... just stunning!...nice to see you on my page.. huggs
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