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Poetic Tears

Paper rain showers over me... With fallen letters drifting free... Two words left on a scroll... Page less thoughts left to hold... Ticks on a clock still measure time... From day to night it's a world of rhyme... Poetic tears that moisten my pen... Dipped in the inkwell of now and then...

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Sean Goodwin

Date: 12/1/2012 8:04:00 AM

Ahh the page and the pen, sometimes I think they are the only true friends I've got in my life. Wonderful poem Michael. -- Sean

Elenushka Toledo

Date: 11/30/2012 6:37:00 AM

You are a master poet!! I love how you penned your words Michael?

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 11/27/2012 3:37:00 AM

What a way you have with words.......very addictive reading your poetry :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/25/2012 3:38:00 PM

Wow.......amazing write. So expressive of the heart of a poet. Thank you for sharing this couplet! :) I enjoyed living through the imagery!

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/19/2012 8:08:00 PM

very nicely written...love the way you out this piece together!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/19/2012 8:08:00 PM

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Len Gasun

Date: 11/19/2012 7:48:00 AM

Gee! This is another superbly beautiful poem of yours Michael! Big congrats! Thank you so much again for sharing, your precious time visiting my work and your nice comments my dear friend! More power and blessings to you always! love/hugs, Leonora

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/19/2012 3:17:00 AM

Excellent poem. Well done Michael.

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 11/18/2012 7:09:00 PM

Hope the people in your life appreciate your magnificent nature....

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/18/2012 6:35:00 PM

Oh, beautiful write, Michael. I like "dipped in the inkwell of now and then..." It's true. It is a sum of who we are. Love ya, Toquyen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2012 6:08:00 PM

I love that soft nostalgic fade away into now and then, Michael. Lovely. As for my latest sonnet. I had to use those words Dalila gave us, so it was from HER mind that I got those ideas, indirectly you could say!!!

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/18/2012 5:31:00 PM

I really enjoyed this read Michael, and really true, sometimes if we think too hard the blank page will show up, but when we think nothing but tears, it will start to heat up the engine in your pen :) Lovely poem - Hug, Yanny

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2012 5:23:00 PM

absolutely beautiful and touching .. sweet and tender those poetic tears Michael luv ... JG is very moved by your intimate emotion luv .. your words emit smiles for me .. and dry my tears .. returning luv and more more more as my favorite song says .. remember that one luv?? I dance to it everyday .. JG in dancing mode .. forever xoxo

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/18/2012 2:15:00 PM

Fantastic write, Michael! Enjoyed it much! Love, Kim

Jack Horne

Date: 11/18/2012 1:05:00 PM

just love this one, Michael - the last line is awesome

Kash Poet

Date: 11/18/2012 11:20:00 AM

This is an amazing poem from you Michael.A deep write.Enjoyed the read.

Shnkimmel Clarke

Date: 11/18/2012 10:11:00 AM

I like the style of how you write similar to mines

Holly Moore

Date: 11/18/2012 9:10:00 AM

This is very beautiful...poetry definitely takes hold of the poet. Thanks for the comment on my "Suicide and the Butterfly Boy!" xxxoo Holly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2012 8:21:00 AM

Emotive work that is packed with feeling..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your presence at my work..You presence there was uplifting..Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/18/2012 8:04:00 AM

Ink on paper depicts the thoughts of poets compared with tears, nicely done. Loved always, bl

David Williams

Date: 11/18/2012 5:30:00 AM

Michael smooth romantic lines you have penned here, excellent...Dave

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/17/2012 11:10:00 PM

wow Michael a deep writing here. loved each line. hug? dinda.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/17/2012 6:37:00 PM

This is a great rhyme and I really enjoyed this Poetic Tears, simple but caught my feelings :), thank you Michael for your kindly visit to my page, it is really a pleasure :D - Hug, Yanny

Joseph May

Date: 11/17/2012 4:40:00 PM

......nicely penned Michael...thanks for stopping by...

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/17/2012 4:00:00 PM

Brilliant, this is simply a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this superior and truly phenomenal poem this afternoon! There are definitely some poetic tears that I've shed in my lifetime, and there will be more to come I'm sure! What a powerful piece this one is Michael, Great Work!!

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 11/17/2012 4:08:00 PM

Russell your comments always lift my spirits.. even when I'm sure what I wrote was any good...thank you....

Omneya Kamal

Date: 11/17/2012 3:36:00 PM

"Poetic tears that moisten my pen... Dipped in the inkwell of now and then..." I love this verse! I love all your Poem Micheal really so creative, Have a great week, Omneya

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 11/17/2012 4:07:00 PM

Thank you Hun... glad the words speak to you...xx