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Poetic Justice

The decision of precision The glam of the jam The squeeze that produces the please The rush that induces the hush The eternal silence of the sleep The response from my rule Sweet, simple and pure The predator’s cure All to sad No prejudice, all are welcome To take their “shot”, at a “solution” Go ahead, it’s your “right” To be “empowered” To make the choice between life and death For your brethren and his family It’s your constitutional amendment That allows you to bear arms And “execute” your “right” at a whim We the people will protect “your rights” Even though you violated someone else’s We’ll make sure that you are treated fairly We’ll clothe, feed and educate you Until we decide if your guilty or not Then when we convict you We’ll make sure that you stay locked up and “alive” We’ll give you early release for “good behavior” Even though that’s not why you here in the first place We will uphold “your rights” Even though you denied another's right to live We will allow you to live Because we won’t violate your right to life We will allow appeals, to plead your unfair judgment We will rehabilitate you for society A sick attitude To allow the decision of death and then apply punishment For the execution of that right A sick mind running a twisted world It’s wrong, and we all know it Eric (and sometimes not)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/12/2020 7:37:00 AM
Oh my, what a piece. We've faced this in our community with a case that was appealed twice, the first time an accomplice was "discovered" and the second time, the original killer (of three family members) was set free. Enjoyed the piece tremendously.
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Date: 4/14/2020 5:30:00 PM
I really appreciate it thank you Reason A. Poteet it means a great deal to me that you enjoyed it. Justice sadly is not balanced as the scales would lead one to believe.
Date: 4/11/2020 8:07:00 AM
Wow. A topic not too many people discuss. VERY original. 10+
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Date: 4/11/2020 8:17:00 AM
Corenne thank you so much for your reply I am gratified you enjoyed this your comment is also a 10+ to me
Date: 11/29/2009 9:32:00 AM
Thank you James, its good to know people like yourself are still alive inside.
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:17:00 AM
Strong powerful words, but words i totally agree with, kool piece Eric >> James
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Date: 8/1/2009 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week. God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 7/31/2009 11:29:00 AM
Eric~ Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 7/28/2009 2:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured>>James
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Date: 7/27/2009 12:30:00 PM
Great poetry Eric, and a well desearved feature this week !!! james
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Date: 7/27/2009 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Eric. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2009 8:00:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 7/26/2009 6:20:00 PM
Much for the reader to think about here. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/6/2009 10:49:00 AM
A sick mind running a twisted world. Who's mind Eric?
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Date: 1/9/2009 7:19:00 PM
Thank you Tyesha, this was in response to watching to many run thru the revolving justice system in its infinite wisdom of giving kids matches and then slapping their hands when they started a fire. As always good to hear from you.
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Date: 1/9/2009 5:55:00 PM
Deep, Deep indeed, true messages here, deeply written and profoundly expressed..tyesha
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