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Poetic Dances

From my very beginnings I have been, like no other - I have lived a dream; the joy in life sadly, I have not seen, yet my soul is like a cool forest stream. My writing are fragments - I have taken, from a broken heart that weeps a poem; for each sad sorrow, each I awaken, my life is writing and poetry my home. As a grown woman I am a cool dawn, but there is thunder in my soul, a storm; and from my pen the words are drawn, each line taking its own sweet form. My nights are dreams and my days trances, and I spin and weave poetic dances. _________________________ Contest 223 Eighth Place

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Date: 12/4/2016 7:45:00 PM
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Date: 10/16/2016 1:04:00 PM
oh BW, so beautifully written, as always! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/16/2016 9:02:00 AM
This poem is absolutely beautiful Broken Wings! It has the melancholy of Poe...I love it! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 10/15/2016 12:36:00 PM
and let the poetic dances waltz thru time. Truly enjoyed the flow and rhythm of the poem.
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Date: 10/14/2016 9:56:00 PM
I agree w/Rick, beautiful poem, Broken Wings. A great ending as well. Touche and kudos. A Souper 7 for sure. I love it, I love it like that. It has bounce and flow. Structured elegantly like a beautiful staircase of words. Keep the love and knowledge flowing. Much love and more love to you. BTW, call me RW (Romantic Warrior.)
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Date: 10/14/2016 9:33:00 PM
My nights are dreams and my days trances, and I spin and weave poetic dances' beautifully done Broken wings. Have you read, Taliesin sings of his knowledge, this reminds me of that a little, just differently said. /|\
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