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Poetic Bum

. There she stood as i had the layover Standing Poetically And softly peeking her hip's skin Only the poetic bum Could imagine my lips my caress * Some souls may remember this "Poetic Bum"

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Diane Christian

Date: 6/11/2015 1:46:00 PM

A good write, and expressive, Thanks for your kind comments on my poems

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/7/2015 6:49:00 PM

Must be getting rusty for I had to read it twice before the words sank in. lol Nicely written James. love phyl

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/24/2015 5:34:00 AM

With minimal words, comes a passionate power! Stirring the imagination senseless yet again my friend. In awe again! Always, Laura

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/17/2015 11:04:00 AM

Hello James, hope the weekend is treating you good ;) enjoyed this romantic write of yours..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/15/2015 3:10:00 PM

another original creation from you,james... it is a poetic ' bomb', lol..huggs

Constance La France

Date: 5/13/2015 7:20:00 AM

James, I feel the poetic man in your writing, not sure if I would say bum, yet you tell me you were a beach bum, lol, by the ocean, a hippie dwells in you methinks, question dear friend do you still have that majestic beard pictured and thanks for visiting my poem, a perfect day. . .

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/12/2015 9:59:00 PM

Hi James.. First time I'm stopping by to read your writes. Interesting format and content in this one with a hint of spice...cool ;)

Daver Austin

Date: 5/12/2015 10:49:00 AM

A peek into fantasy, eh? You write of these peeks quite often Sir James. What I love about your poetry is the brevity. You manage to send a soft message that need not be complicated. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2015 3:56:00 PM

It's repost then, James? Nice romantic one. It is your favorite genre!!