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Poetess Darkly

The poetess walks along a darkened hallway Listening for the answers in the night Her heart contained behind a glass doorway She sees her heart pulsating with white light Pounding on the opaque glass she screams listening for the answers in the night Behind this door imprisoned are her dreams Heart on a plate waiting to be devoured pounding on the opaque glass she screams Some people call this the witching hour Creatures of the night begin their feast Heart on a plate waiting to be devoured Her heart absorbs the energy from the beasts Creatures of the night no longer feast The poetess walks along a darkened hallway Her heart contained behind a glass doorway July 12/2013

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Red Fiery

Date: 3/14/2016 9:22:00 PM

such a beautiful write ...Richard, I enjoyed reading this and i wish to read all your poems...I am sure I can do that...Hats off to you for this awesome write...Hugs Red

The Situation

Date: 7/14/2013 9:36:00 AM

had to see this entry. i'm impressed with the style.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2013 7:42:00 PM

Thanks Situation

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 7/13/2013 1:56:00 AM

really good u have captured the feelings well my dearest Poet. hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2013 5:31:00 PM

Thanks Manel.

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 7/13/2013 12:56:00 AM

Oh Wow......this is really awesome Rick. I really really liked this piece. ....i could almost picture this story in a movie.....Shaz

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2013 6:12:00 AM

Thanks Shaz.

Michael Dom

Date: 7/12/2013 8:28:00 PM

Hey, darkly written allright. You're so good at terzanelle Richard. Like it.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2013 6:07:00 AM

Thanks Michael

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/12/2013 5:18:00 PM

Richard, this is fantastic! Very well done! Love, Kim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2013 7:36:00 PM

Thanks Kim! Have a wonderful evening.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 5:05:00 PM

Thank you R L., for the comment. I do enjoy Lisa, and I am happy to know that I am part of the reason she desired a contest for herself... I am smiling with her... Good luck In her contest. she will adore this poem. xox....PD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2013 7:37:00 PM

I hope she likes it, I read some of her work to get a feel for what she might like.

Skat A

Date: 7/12/2013 5:01:00 PM

Lisa C, the girl behind a glass doorway. love the way you poet-ed the poet. she is amazing.......... SKAT

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2013 7:39:00 PM

Thanks SKAT, this is one of the more intresting comments I have received, I like it.