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Poem Disaster

don't let those feelings be your master come on with another poem disaster poetic justice is what you write others try to compare are in for a fight yes we delight in the lord above get in our way and we have no choice but to shove total breakdown words don't flow you thought of everything you don't know when we fight it's for real when your caught up in it you'll surly feel the flow we bestow will inevitably show as the lord is our master we don't eat crow show me the poem and i will show you mine mine will leave you in the dust ,left behind don't let those feelings be your master come on with another poem disaster

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Date: 2/22/2014 9:06:00 PM
Dear Gregory: A bit of angst is good. Nice read. Leon
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Date: 2/22/2014 9:26:00 PM
thank you leon for your review

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