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Plumes of Smoke

Plumes of smoke rise up From dead wood, a red hot fire Decayed leaves, Autumn

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John Loving Iii

Date: 1/15/2014 7:20:00 PM

but what have you done lately?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2011 7:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being once again featured this week before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Cynthia. The best to you in the contest. Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/3/2011 2:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Cynthia. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/25/2009 9:54:00 AM

The aroma of this piece is very strong..your words are beautiful..you paint pictures with words very well.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/19/2009 8:48:00 AM

I like this haiku!

Date: 3/17/2009 4:08:00 PM

Good use of multi-sensed imagery in this concise poem. You paint a picture with words. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us. Keep on writing! Karen

Arany P.

Date: 3/16/2009 11:27:00 PM

lovely haiku... related really well to the upcoming season! ~ Arany

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/16/2009 9:39:00 PM

Pretty, the visuals in this one are wonderful. Very well done. Smiles from Lolita