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Whene'er you feel dismay my own heart aches, that you should suffer so without release, I would engage the hurt for both our sakes, absorb the pain, and set your soul at peace. For I can ne'er be still'd whilst you are filled with anguish, your tranquility dis-eased, we two as one, our aggravations spilled and blended 'til the torment be appeased. To find a way from darkness into light, to cast away your feelings of despair we will prevail, that all our days be bright, and you shall rest content within my care; this spell of trepidation disappears as with my love you overcome your fears.

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Date: 5/14/2016 7:35:00 PM
Bravery, beauty and strength are what I get from this excellently written sonnet. I also felt the oneness of Life.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/15/2016 4:50:00 PM
Many thanks my friend... your perceptive comments are much appreciated. Keith

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