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Pleasure Prophecy

hands on curve of hips head bent close to my navel tongue in omphalic orbit waiting for that dip your prophecy of pleasure makes of me a believer Jade Celeste

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/8/2016 9:43:00 PM

Very artfully done, Eileen. Within the bounds of decorum, you displayed a very sensual image of love. Beautiful poem no doubt. Love always.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/24/2016 12:24:00 PM

Hi Eileen, back again after being away with one cold on top of another. I love this tactfully projected and suggestive image. Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2016 8:09:00 AM

Dropping by with a hug.

Carol B.

Date: 10/30/2016 10:16:00 PM

Your poem oozes sensuality. I admire your talent for writing such beautiful pieces :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2016 6:37:00 PM

very sexy, Eileen. And so tactfully done!! Love it!

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/30/2016 11:36:00 AM

There are so many things I want to say but I won't. Whew!!!A delicious write, Eileen!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2016 2:57:00 PM

Awwww....now I'll never know! Thanks for using that adjective though. I'm glad it was to your taste.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/30/2016 10:15:00 AM

Passion erupts...done tastefully

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2016 2:58:00 PM

You can't know how much that means, Tim. I like my work to be tasteful and not vulgar. I will not stop writing of passion. It fuels my heat. Blessings.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/30/2016 8:26:00 AM

Ooh la la! You tell the future beautifully.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2016 2:59:00 PM

Thanks, Richard. Always a pleasure to get that Ooh la la! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/30/2016 3:49:00 AM

...and lead us not into temptation.. ..! One to resist such an image one has to be either wise or a saint and I am neither! Have mercy dear Eileen ! Haha! A seven.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/30/2016 3:09:00 PM

Dear poet....Your comment in itself is a beautiful testament to your heart. :) So many claim to be saints...Thanks for the visit. ;) Bless your heart. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/30/2016 8:22:00 AM

Ha ha, your response brought a smile.