Plastic Playground - Visual 5

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Plastic Playground The plastic playground sits on land, Land now defaced of nature’s scheme. Scheme offers colored shapes pristine— Pristine like board games played inside. © Sandra M. Haight 2015 All Rights Reserved ~6th Place~ Contest: Four Lines Only - Visual 5 Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Judged: 06/12/2015 .

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/14/2015 3:26:00 PM

Well written Sarah.. Congrats on the win..'

Skat A

Date: 6/12/2015 7:47:00 PM

Sandra, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/12/2015 6:24:00 PM

You took a different direction on the visual, thinking outside the box. Great work, Sandra! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2015 3:21:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/12/2015 1:03:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Sandra

Sneha Rv

Date: 6/12/2015 10:07:00 AM

Congrats on your fantastic win, dear Sandra!! :D :D

Constance La France

Date: 6/7/2015 7:22:00 PM

Sandra, this poem is fantastic and perfectly penned and thanks for visiting my poem today

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2015 11:25:00 AM

Love your take on the image - i have chosen this one too but gone from a totally different angle:-) Will post it later :-) Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7