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Planned Suicide

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Planned Suicide

Planned Suicide


Lying on the bed
Crying for help
The only other option
Is a slow painless death
She picks up the telephone
Talking to a friend
My life is useless
It somehow must end

There’s no joy in 
Her soul today
Visions of suicide in
Her head do play
When she needed someone
To just be there
They turned their backs
They just didn’t care

She went into the bathroom
And looked into the mirror
Heart broken, lonely,
Sad and teary
No one would answer her
When she calls
No, not a soul,
Not anyone at all 

She held up her arms and
Said, my life is a twist
Seconds later she
Cut both her wrists.
Laying on the floor
In a puddle of blood
Crying, and sad because
No one gave her love

While slowly closing her eyes
One more time she cried;
It’s over for me now
No more hurt inside
Before she planned 
This selfish act
She wrote a note
And explained the facts

The note said I’m leaving
Not that anyone care
When I needed you the most
You were never there
You can’t find my life
Because Now I am free
No one ever cared what 
Happened to me
I don’t have to hear 
Or put up with lies
No one made me do this
It’s a planned suicide!!!!!!!

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 9:16:00 PM
    Awesome words you got up there,,, congrats on your well deserved win ;}

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Richard's "Suicide Survivor" contest Lillie. Love, Carol

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 11/30/2012 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Carol. Have a blessed week-end and may God bless you always.
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 5:40:00 AM
    Congratulations with your deep winning poem...have a nice thanksgiving day...love pd

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 11/26/2012 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much. I have been out for a while, but now I am back, and I thank you so much for your review on my work. May God bless you always! :-)
  1. Date: 11/20/2012 12:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on your Hm Lillie xx

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 11/26/2012 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy. I value your opinion. Be blessed always! :-)
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:25:00 PM
    Told exactly like it is, Lillie, this is a very well and graphicly written poem, excellent work....

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 11/26/2012 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I appreciate that Harry. Thanks for visiting my work. Come back anytime! :-)
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 10:25:00 AM
    A sad poem ..... man must be "deep down" when one is planning to take his own life. - There is always someone who loves you, who will be left with grief. - Lillie, you've written a good poem - thanks for your visit and I appreciate your comments - welcome back another time. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 11/15/2012 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne for visiting my work. I enjoy having you here and you are always welcome. Sometimes life tries to get the best of us, but as long as we know that someone cares: it makes a world of different. Thanks so much!!!
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 4:15:00 PM
    My Goodness, Lillie! So many times while reading this poem, I just wanted to call out, "You can call me, I care!" Very emotional poem. I belong to a group on another web site, for people with mental illness, yes i am one of them, but it does allow me the opportunity to be there for others if they need someone to talk too, or just to care. Hugs, Catie :)

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 11/14/2012 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Catie, I appreciate that. How does the site work and how can you get to it? You are a very caring and giving person. I am glad to have the opportunity to meet you. You always make my day with your smiles and caring heart. May God bless you always. Here's a smile right back at you. :-)
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 2:37:00 PM
    Winner for sure...I hope just for the contest and not what is happening to you..Sara

    Williams Avatar Lillie Williams
    Date: 11/14/2012 5:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara. Prayers are always needed. I appreciate you reviewing my writing. I am so glad that you like it. Thanks so much. I want to give you a smile like Catie has given me. :-) Thanks.