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Planck To Present

If we close our eyes, can we look back to the start When the Universe began, when science played it's part Particle clouds so massive, so immense It's us, look around, learn it makes sense Drifting microbes, bacteria of sorts For millions of years mingled into life shaped contorts It has taken eons of time as life became known Where human words like Mother Nature, having claimed life's throne For in her sphere, blossomed riches of note From Dinosaurs to Zebra's, it's her right to gloat But what she has given is a chance to let live On this planet of beauty that we continue to sieve If we close our eyes, and we look back to the start We should be so very fortunate, we were invited to take part http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/space-3.php

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Date: 11/5/2010 10:51:00 PM
Yes, I talk to the maker every day and give thanks. Charles
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Date: 11/4/2010 1:13:00 PM
Indeed, we're fortunate to be able to enjoy everything nature and the universe has to offer. You take us on an introspective journey through a time tunnel to make your point, James. I wish everyone could appreciate the wonders of the universe the way you do. Excellent poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/4/2010 11:53:00 AM
I just love you couplets James and yes we are fortunate indeed that we were invited to take part. Hope your week's been treating you good ;) Wilma
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Date: 11/2/2010 2:27:00 PM
Yes, it is good to be alive..To be alive in this day and age...It is so good that God decided to create man and woman...Even though we have messed up it is good be here..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:44:00 AM
Hello James, Bravo! Wonderful message here and so well done. I love it. As Always Shar
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Date: 10/31/2010 5:36:00 PM
Nice beginning with a question and nice result at the end, enjoyed it, James
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Date: 10/31/2010 5:23:00 PM
primordial soup....monkeys to man you say?? eek!
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