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Pitter Patter Falls (Haiku)

rushing waters fall
as of sweet rhythmic curtains,
draping moss and stone

Submitted for Raul Moreno's "Rhythm of The Falls" contest.

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  1. Date: 7/27/2010 4:08:00 AM
    Great write that so deserved a win...Congratulations...Sara

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 4:34:00 PM
    A wonderful haiku.

  1. Date: 11/4/2009 1:58:00 PM
    Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 1:18:00 PM
    I like your title and how you describe the water as "sweet rhythmic curtains". Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

  1. Date: 10/24/2009 7:28:00 PM
    Dear Adell, Congratulations on YOUR placing in Raul's Contest with this well deserved Haiku YOUR Talent is Inspiring ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 3:53:00 PM
    lovely precise imagery! congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 4:34:00 AM
    Congratulations, Adelle, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

  1. Date: 10/21/2009 9:05:00 AM
    Very Lovely haiku... I can See and Hear this Poem (and I Love Waterfall Scenes) MoonBee

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 5:12:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest, Adell. This is a winner in my book ... smile ...

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 9:29:00 AM
    Contratulations...I love your Haiku.. There were so many good ones...I'm glad I didn't have to judge...Marty

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 9:24:00 PM
    Congratulations, Adell!! Beautiful imagery!! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 9:07:00 PM
    FELICITATIONS! on your win. ...curtains...draping... AWESOME imagery!

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 2:49:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in the contest Adell.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 10:26:00 PM
    Lovely! Great job here, Adell! Congratulations on your winning. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 7:56:00 PM
    Beautiful Haiku, dear Adell. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 7:25:00 PM
    I can feel the spray from your image here. Nice work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anihs

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 5:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your WIN with this beautiful Haiku, Adell! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 4:36:00 PM
    A beautiful description and a winning poem! Congratulations, Adell!! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 3:37:00 PM
    Congratulations Adell! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 3:36:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Adell. Love, Carol