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Piteous the Legion

Sweep then across the flowing sea of time to stand unseen amid a stinking horde and there behold the rich who turn away or groveling poor that vaguely beckon— surveying misery's grimy bounds of each. Wretched feeble ones of withered limb and clouded eye—ladies in their rags— ignored by ones who might have paused and bent but never did, to burden beggars' bowls, nudging them from darkness into light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/27/2016 3:39:00 PM
Oh! Beautiful! Very lovely. I love the use of language.I see alliteration flowing 'burden beggars' bowls'... Lots of imagery ' to stand unseen amid a stinking horde'... 'Wretched feeble ones of withered limb and clouded eye—ladies in their rags—'... Each line is worth reading over and over again. Going down to my fave, surely. Well penned, Mark.
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Date: 5/22/2014 4:03:00 PM
Quite Shakespearean, methinks. That's what I like about blank verse. I really like the invisible time traveler motif. Kind of Wellsian.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 5/22/2014 4:38:00 PM
Thanks, Roy. Several have commented on the poetic flow of my free verse poetry. This was originally posted as free verse. But then I chanced upon a blank verse poem and decided to try and convert this one to iambic pentameter. I wonder if such poetry as this is antiquated.
Date: 4/22/2014 4:07:00 AM
A most enjoyable, moving read. For a Free Verse, your flow and rhythm are enchanting.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 4/25/2014 10:31:00 PM
Scott, thanks for your praise, which sustains me and my frequently-disabled muse.
Date: 3/11/2014 7:13:00 AM
This is stunning in its sadness and brutal honesty. So many times we fail to see, to bend, to reach out.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/12/2014 12:52:00 AM
Thank you, Monterey. I so appreciate your visits.
Date: 3/10/2014 7:46:00 PM
an excellent poem which inspired some reflection. well done!
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/12/2014 12:53:00 AM
Ilene, it's been so long since I've seen you on my pages. Thanks for stopping by and leaving reflective comment.

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