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pintka 1

summer solstice moon
bright as an oncoming train
pressing silver light
into my glistening pint
carving stark shadows from the night

Michael F. Lewis
6/21/2013

Invented another new style...
tanka + pint = pintka

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  1. Date: 6/22/2013 3:40:00 PM
    How the f ... is an oncoming train bright ? Even a pissed up shite can't be shite !

    Lewis Avatar Michael F Lewis
    Date: 6/22/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    talk...walk....forget it, I need another stout....lol
    Lewis Avatar Michael F Lewis
    Date: 6/22/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    In your case Nigel, maybe you should just talk into the light...never mined the tunnel brother, walk on!