Pink Blossoms

pink blossoms mature 'pon calla lilies' green stems.. dewdrops large pitcher Monday July 1, 2013 Out On The Porch

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2013 11:30:00 PM

love it... PD

Heather Ober

Date: 7/2/2013 11:44:00 AM

Oh, a very lovely haiku! You paint such a pretty picture with just a few short lines. Wonderful job :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2013 8:32:00 PM

Nice one out on the porch!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/1/2013 5:07:00 PM

You are quickly becoming a master at the Haiku, at least to me you are! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a wonderful piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 7/1/2013 8:23:00 AM

Lovely!

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/1/2013 7:49:00 AM

I love the verbiage & flow in this Haiku. Very sweet!