Pietà

A lifeless body, Chiseled from divinity: Draped in mother’s arms.

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Date: 10/20/2009 11:49:00 PM

A gorgeous sculture in words Raul.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments today

Date: 10/20/2009 5:38:00 PM

You and Ruben have made an extraordinary pair of bookends with your lovely pieces today. Bravo! Love, Donna

Date: 10/20/2009 1:50:00 PM

i picture Jesus in the hands of his MOther Mary..amen Raul..beautiful..inspirational too-Charma

Date: 10/20/2009 11:27:00 AM

I receive a picture of Christ's body after crucifixtion as his mother held his lifeless body, Raul. Is this your intention? Sincerely, Moses

Date: 10/20/2009 10:46:00 AM

Beautifullly penned, Raul! A brilliant display of your artistry and one of my favs! Love, Robin

Date: 10/20/2009 10:29:00 AM

Speechless. Love, Carol

Date: 10/20/2009 7:24:00 AM

Described so perfectly. "Chiseled from divinity" ....what a wonderful line! ~

Date: 10/20/2009 7:18:00 AM

You just keep rolling along. I love this. BG

Date: 10/20/2009 6:56:00 AM

great!

Date: 10/20/2009 3:58:00 AM

Good job. Keep writing. Sara

Date: 10/20/2009 2:46:00 AM

Perfectly described very visual with few words. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com