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Pierced

You see through my uneasiness My ego deflated by your gaze Who could survive the blaze Of fire that gushes out.. set to devour. Ashes Dust Light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/28/2016 3:54:00 PM
A 7 and a favorite... excellent composition with outstanding phrasing and stark imagery. BRAVO Aida! Best wishes, Keith
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