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Pierce My Heart

Pierce my heart Taken me granted, all my love, you don't bother much, Was so sure, from very first day, those moments we intensely shared... All that was mine, is now yours, denial now, will be unfair, Lost everything, was not my destiny, in memories I live today, how far.... Thoughts depress, I must confess, was a fool, from that first day, Tears once kissed my rosy cheeks, rosy red, rosy once, have dried today, Why did you do so..... What better will you ever get, get up now, see me now, to later regret, For I am the one, I am the one, everything for you, anything for you...... Lived for you, can die too, have a needle sharp, edge aim at me, Cut me through, pierce my heart, Test my wild rush for you, and bleed my passion through and through...... See your name splashed over floor, Pierce my heart, further squeeze, You now have a stony heart, why have you become so hard.... Burn me, chop me, crush me, tear apart, Oh your laughter makes my soul weep You are not the one..... You cannot be the one..... Inspired by song "grenade by Bruno Mars" Written July 31st, 2015 For contest by Silent one Entered for "The heart that bleeds" poetry contest by Freddie V

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Date: 8/3/2015 7:00:00 PM
This was a really intense addition to the contest. A well deserved placement! Beautiful writing inspired by an awesome song. : ) Always, Laura
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:07:00 PM
Thnx Laura! Glad u liked!
Date: 8/3/2015 12:56:00 AM
Congrats on a beautiful poem and win.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:07:00 PM
Thnx James!
Date: 8/2/2015 7:38:00 PM
How wonderful to take the song and make it your own ! Congratulations on a great winning poem !
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:07:00 PM
Yes Carrie that's how it was! Appreciate ur kind visit!
Date: 8/2/2015 11:02:00 AM
Wonderful and interesting piece...Congrats on your well deserved win...
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:08:00 PM
Thnx olusegun!
Date: 8/1/2015 10:55:00 PM
well done , i loved reading these words...Seren
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:08:00 PM
Glad u liked Seren, thnx for ur kind visit!
Date: 8/1/2015 10:44:00 PM
Dr. Upma, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. I love the song "grenade" by Bruce Mars. And your poem " Pierce My Heart" did justice to the song.Great job! :-)Alexis
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:09:00 PM
Thnx Alexis, appreciate ur sweet words!
Date: 8/1/2015 11:50:00 AM
I love this! So fundamentally tragic... Congrats on your win, my Dear. xoxo
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:10:00 PM
Yes Lycia somehow emotions are best displayed once u r sad! Thnx for kind visit!
Date: 8/1/2015 9:31:00 AM
Very nice, Upma. Many Congrats.
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:11:00 PM
Thnx abdul!
Date: 8/1/2015 1:05:00 AM
This is such a wonderful poem my dear Dr. Upma. Thank you so much for sharing and my warm congratulations on your win! Big hug and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:12:00 PM
Appreciate ur kind words Leonora, thnx!
Date: 8/1/2015 12:02:00 AM
Nice win
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:12:00 PM
Thnx Skat!
Date: 7/31/2015 11:32:00 PM
Dr Upma,, Congratulations on your win. nice to see this contest by Silent One.... Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thnx PD my sweet friend!
Date: 7/31/2015 10:20:00 PM
This is fabulous Upma...I do like Bruno Mars....congrats Tim
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thnx Tim! His songs are awesome!
Date: 7/31/2015 12:39:00 PM
Expressive and emotive work..Reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:16:00 PM
Thnx Sara for ur always kind support!
Date: 7/31/2015 8:44:00 AM
Brilliant and emotional poem. Closing stanza reveals the acceptance and hurt of rejection! Bravo!! A7
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:17:00 PM
Thnx for a thorough read my good friend Robert! U hv so rightly construed the true emotions captured here!
Date: 7/31/2015 3:35:00 AM
What a wonderful penned, you write this great passion, am so touched with this your beautiful Lyric. Excellence................A.M.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:18:00 PM
Thnx afolabi!
Date: 7/31/2015 3:19:00 AM
I could follow your thought processes from one word to the other, from one line to the next, and from one stanza to the next--and all the blocks were carefully chosen and put in their proper places, and the result is this BEAUTY! Thanks for sharing.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:18:00 PM
Thnx Ndaba! Glad u liked this one!

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