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Pieces of Me

There are pieces of me scattered all around - Some easy to see; some never again to be found. Pieces in the hearts and souls of the children I have raised; Pieces in the poems I write – each and every rhyming phrase. Every hand that I have ever shook, every person I have hugged, Are stained with a piece of me, like catching a seasonal bug. Whether that piece stays where it lands, or falls off like a flake, Depends upon the impression made – but its there, make no mistake. You see me standing here today, and believe that I am whole, But the pieces I have left behind, complete the story my life has told.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/16/2013 12:24:00 PM
good winning poem Joe... :-) pd
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Date: 3/15/2013 10:38:00 AM
Good poem, congrats
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Date: 3/14/2013 8:08:00 PM
Amazing write Joe! Your poetry and friendship are a piece that that hold dear. Hugs
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/14/2013 8:10:00 PM
*that I hold dear
Date: 3/14/2013 7:18:00 PM
I like this a lot. Great take on the contest. Congratulations, Joe. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/14/2013 6:39:00 PM
Love this one, Joe! Great win!
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Date: 3/14/2013 3:31:00 PM
Great poem Joe congratulations :-)
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Date: 3/14/2013 2:33:00 PM
I believe this of you ;) [no fair comapring yourself to the flu though!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/14/2013 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations Joe on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/14/2013 12:06:00 PM
GOOD PEN.... Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/14/2013 10:02:00 AM
Hi , I love your take on this one Joe, congratulations on your winning spot xx
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Date: 3/14/2013 9:15:00 AM
I love your poem Joe!! We had similar ideas.........but yours sailed with such heart and soul !! Loved it......congratulations!!
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Date: 3/13/2013 4:25:00 PM
very nice use of the "pieces" theme - good luck!
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Date: 3/13/2013 12:05:00 AM
wow, Joe, this is amazing!!
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Date: 3/12/2013 9:20:00 PM
Great Joe, well done ...Seren
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Date: 3/12/2013 9:12:00 PM
Joe; You have painted a a beautiful picture of yourself here. Whoever holds a tiny peace of you - will treasure it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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