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Picnic

Lets go to the picnic Lets all go have some fun Pack up some lunch And a rug or two Don’t wear anything ethnic For we might jump and run Yummy strawberries to munch Among the flowers that grew Tossing the ball around a bit Enjoying the pleasant sun Filling the soul with joy On this lovely day that has come Me and my love would closely sit Watching the kids at fun And I would smile sexy and coy Eating plum with rum

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/30/2011 7:23:00 AM
Dear Mannan, your rhyme is tasty tasty beauty as most of all we enjoys in this way.
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Date: 5/12/2011 8:46:00 PM
Very cute, Tahera . I am reading lots of these picnic poems and I don't have a clue how she will ever separate the winners from the losers. There are simply no losers!
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Date: 5/12/2011 5:09:00 PM
Reads like a wonderful picnic..Great write..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2011 9:02:00 AM
Wish you a quick recovery...
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Date: 5/12/2011 8:58:00 AM
Lets go Tahera.Cute write on picnic.Best wishes...:)
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Date: 5/12/2011 8:31:00 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read, I love picnics. Caryl
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:51:00 AM
Nice way to enjoy eating plum with rum, rum is my favorite drink when I am in India, Tahera. Hope the surgery is O.K.
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