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Picnic

I lay out the checkered blanket upon the verdant moss while you pop the cork on our sparkling rose I open the tupperware and lay out the drum sticks that our mouths will play on while chips and dip find their way into our hands we laze by the creek that meanders by our picnic spot as we listen to the rippling like laughter as the pure fresh water courses over the stones this air out here is so fresh and clean encourages our appetite and we eat until we are saited our picnic coming to an end it's been a lovely day and turning into a lovely twilight as we tuck ourselves away

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Date: 5/19/2011 10:21:00 AM
Very beautifully written, Cherilyn. Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:20:00 PM
Cherilyn, Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:04:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Cherilyn. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:19:00 AM
My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, cherilyn
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:28:00 AM
Congrats Cherilyn on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write luv.. enjoy your special honor for excellence and creativity ..
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Cherilyn. Love, Carol
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