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Phoenix Defrosted

Phoenix Defrosted Given by the Sun God the good of the moon and some lucky stars he sits full of fortune love and still in miraculous amazement under the bright rays of southern soil soaking unbelievable kindness and mutual compassion granted by soul searching and Higher Power Love had been made before from a different fabric and the colours had quietly faded to screaming silence frozen into glaciers’ clefts of darkness Chances lead the way and permafrost was not forever when the mask came off with all its distortions mangled ice melting into novel beginnings It took him searching of feeling thought desire and some meeting of minds revisiting gently rigorously what had appeared to be the only prospect one of soundless demise and shattering unfeasible stagnant arrest in the prison of domination wilted marred marriage depression and torment Agony struck and it however ignited a passion unknown a mating and union conjoined at hips and above for always and in all ways a heartfelt dance with the Universe high and below inside and within a mango grooved delta of Venus hot soothing lava engulfing new lovers’ poetic trees in poetry’s motion Considering failure in cause and success in effect of landslides misfortune bad luck and bad choices he is fortuitously graced now to thank destiny constellation of karma kismet pure hard worked for chances where one thing leads to another when the ashes are reshuffled and second fire is sublime 06th September 2016

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Date: 9/7/2016 4:27:00 PM
...."Considering failure in cause and success in effect of landslides misfortune bad luck and bad choices he is fortuitously graced now to thank destiny"- best two lines in the poem, congrats on your placement friend :)-luloo
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/8/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you lulloo. It did not take me to write that, but a long time to learn. Lots of sunny wishes from South Africa.
Date: 9/7/2016 3:57:00 PM
Beautiful
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/8/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/7/2016 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations Kai on the placement of the contest.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/8/2016 2:19:00 AM
Thank you very much for your time taken Nayda in sponsoring contests. They are always a good trigger.
Date: 9/7/2016 11:51:00 AM
I love it all, and especially this: "Agony struck and it however ignited a passion unknown a mating and union conjoined at hips and above for always and in all ways a heartfelt dance with the Universe high and below inside and within a mango grooved delta of Venus hot soothing lava engulfing new lovers’ poetic trees in poetry’s motion" Thank you! Darren.
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Date: 9/7/2016 9:18:00 AM
Man can you write...a special talent my friend...enjoyed...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/6/2016 3:58:00 PM
Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/7/2016 3:38:00 AM
Thank you Sara. I appreciate that. Kai

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