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Phantoms

imagination through cool gray mist phantoms drift

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/26/2012 9:50:00 PM
I love how you tied this to the word imagination making it more concrete in the last two lines. well, I have many comments to catch up on since taking my weekend trip but i hope to review more of your haiku at a later date.
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Date: 3/26/2012 7:30:00 AM
I feel the coolness of the ghostly beings... :) Very Nice!
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Date: 3/24/2012 6:36:00 AM
Ann, a creepy image.. only cause I have to drive. Through mist every morning ... nice haiku'..Pd
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