Get Your Premium Membership

Phantom Lovers

I see myself standing there, invisible in the crowd, speaking in silence to all the vacant faces. She walks by, touching me unknowingly. Naked nerves drive me to a quiet chamber in the attic of my mind, her haunting image imprisoned there, glow of the hearth beckoning. I slip through restless veils that dance to ancient rhythms, bind me in the pleasures of this moment. Purple flames skip across the smoldering log. We are shadows on the wall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/24/2009 4:23:00 PM
nicely penned, hot one!!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2009 4:02:00 PM
Nicely done. Like the use of metaphor here.Keep writing. Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs