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Pets Little pup at my paternal uncle's house, Moved from his mother's lap and chose mine, Pure black, on forehead a white stripe, Tears of love in his eyes, that I did wipe , Reached my home and added onto family, Dear he soon became, grew up hastily, Faithful, wagging his tail in affection, Clever and alert, wit in perfection, A burglar's alarm, awake at nights, Sweet morning walks and evening fights, Winters, summers, autumn, rains and fog, With every season bloomed, Bruzo my dear dog ! Language of love unsaid, yet perfectly understood, Pets are the best friends beyond any brotherhood ! Rewritten on 11/27/14 for Shadow Hamilton's 'Pets' contest Revised version of my original poem 'Bruzo my dog' Awarded 4th place

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Date: 11/29/2014 11:28:00 PM
Congrats on the win Upma, nice this good poem made it to the top...huggs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/30/2014 12:05:00 AM
Thnx Kayode!
Date: 11/29/2014 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem about your beloved dog and of your win. Love, Joyce
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/30/2014 12:05:00 AM
Thnx Joyce! Gud to see u visit my page!
Date: 11/29/2014 12:40:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/29/2014 12:45:00 PM
Thnx Jan!
Date: 11/29/2014 12:26:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr. Sharma.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/29/2014 12:35:00 PM
Thnx Brenda!
Date: 11/29/2014 11:46:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting stories in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/29/2014 12:12:00 PM
Thnx for ur visit to my page n kind wishes Sara!
Date: 11/29/2014 7:23:00 AM
beautiful poem Doc Upma your love shines through congrats on win and ty for your support hugs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/29/2014 12:13:00 PM
Glad u liked my poem Shadow! Thnx for having confidence in me!
Date: 11/29/2014 7:23:00 AM
beautiful poem Doc Upma your love shines through congrats on win and ty for your support hugs
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Date: 11/28/2014 12:56:00 PM
I know exactly what your talking about... we have 2 cats and 1 dog... a Golden Retriever! All they want is love and to be fed! LOL XXX
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/29/2014 12:40:00 PM
True Jack they r so very affectionate ! Unconditional love! Glad to know u hv three of them!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/29/2014 12:40:00 PM
Yes Scott they r the best friends
Date: 11/28/2014 6:37:00 AM
Dogs, dogs, dogs, one of the best topics to be writing poetry about. Cause with dogs you get unconditional love, and what could be better. Great poem.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/29/2014 12:42:00 PM
Yes Scott they r our best friends as far as I know, extremely loving!
Date: 11/27/2014 3:32:00 PM
Ahhh!! Reads like a winner..Aren't pets wonderful..I enjoyed reading your entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/29/2014 12:43:00 PM
Yes Sara wonderful to be associated wid them so close! Thnx for ur kind visit!
Date: 11/27/2014 2:37:00 PM
This is an amazing pet Sonnet Dr. Sharma. I am a lover of dogs and your poem hits home.
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:44:00 PM
Thnx Brenda! Glad u liked this one!
Date: 11/27/2014 12:19:00 PM
aww this is such a lovely tribute to your pet Dr Sharma:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:43:00 PM
Thnx Jan!

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