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~Peter Pan~ (Rhyme) Peter Pan where are you going I guess it's Wendy you're looking for And to Neverland now you are flying As Tinkerbell spreads magic at my door I always watched you in completely awe All these years since I was really small O Peter you were always my hero then You were my favorite out of them all In the eyes of every child you're so tall O Peter you're so brave and so strong With Wendy and the kids you're so sweet Forever you've planted in my heart a song! In the end you beat Old Hook as you'd plan Oh Peter Pan I am still your number #1 fan! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2006 January.23. 2015

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Date: 3/4/2015 8:00:00 AM
Fun, sweet and entertaining! I wish I had time to read all of your poems! Your style is beautiful!
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Date: 1/24/2015 5:34:00 AM
love it, peter pan, one of children's first magical dreams is to fly. xxx Dee
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Date: 1/24/2015 12:02:00 AM
Hi Dorian, Great poem I alway's loved Peter pan also. I remember when I was young buying four copies of the book and giving them to friends I was so exited when I read it for the first time. Thanks again for the great write. Love Shane xxx
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