Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Petals In The Wind

Deb Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Petals In The Wind which was written by poet Deb Wilson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Deb Wilson

Best Deb Wilson Poems

+ Fav Poet

Petals In The Wind

She lies in the breeze,her long tresses flowing.
So lost in the canopy of her mind.
Her soul sparks a flame and it sends her glowing.
Traveling on to see what she can find.

Nearby stands a garden of elegant measure.
Musical whispers float by the sweet blooms.
She hastens to gather each colorful treasure.
As she dips and glides into nature's rooms.

Seemingly effortless,she slides away.
Watching for sunbeams to light up her trail.
She dances the moment and soaks up each ray.
Her arms filled with bouquets that she can inhale.

On the wind now the petals are drifting.
Moonlight sonata begins to unfold.
Sun bids farewell as the starscape is lifting.
She's homeward bound with such tales to be told.





written Monday January 21st, 2013
By Deb Wilson  for Gail's contest

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:46:00 AM
    Congrats on this beauty of a poem winning!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:44:00 PM
    Many many congrats for this win dear Deb.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 12:57:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Deb luv xx

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 6:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win!! :)

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 9:06:00 AM
    A breathtaking poem, such a beauty!! Congratulations Deb, Your petals have drifted in the wind, and touched the heart! :)

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:31:00 AM
    How this beauty dances in the wind...love it !! Congratulations on your win !!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:00:00 PM
    Hello Deb, the canopy of her mind. slaved in with the elegance of your work. I love the fine poem you have here. Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 4:38:00 PM
    Congrats on winning with this verse of magical journey.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:45:00 PM
    Great poetic winning work..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:44:00 PM
    Deb an incredible wonderful poem. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:39:00 PM
    Congratulations, Deb. Su

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:52:00 PM
    Oh Deb this is beautiful !! Congrats on your win!!! Well done. Deb

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:10:00 PM
    Congrats Deb on your big win, a tremendously beautiful poem, nice to see you atop, enjoy your well deserved success, love xxxx

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 2:10:00 PM
    This is lovely, very good poem Deb! - I wish you good luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 1:50:00 PM
    I love the canopy of her mind line- that is great! Really good imagery you have depicted in this stunning poem :)

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 1:24:00 AM
    Hi deb wow love the imagery conjured up in this wonderful pen, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:03:00 AM
    wow, this contest is inspiring such beautiful poetry. yours is among them. I really enjoyed this, Deb.