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Pet Sit Panic

~PANIC from the DOGS POV~ They left me yeah..woof ME! woof! Love that car! grrrrrrrrrr Blankie where’d my blankie go?? Mommie!!!!! (howl) Daddie !! (Howl) (Whimper)(Simper)* Who’s that Lady, I smell her… NOPE not MY Mommie! (The discarded pup chases its tail) (howl) (growl)* Gonna HIDE! yeah..yup HIDE! NOPE~ ~ `dope* Gonna EAT! (bark) (bark) FOOD! hey Lady FO O D>>>>>>> I GOT Kisses (a giant pink tongue slobbers with drool toward the puppy sitter!) OH NO!!!! I smell CAT (grrrrrrrr) (howl) (bark) FOOD? cat? Kisses for food (What’s a dog to do?) Kisses and food YEAH! (Can’t get out to get CAT!) Gimme gimme HERE pretty sitter kisses for YOU! Awwwwwww, you so nicey sitter! I luv YOU! ( giant, pink, bubble- gum, tongue licks on sitters facie!) (Sniff)(lean)(cuddle) I think I luv YOU TOO! What? CAR???? Mommie!!!!! HOWL, prowl* (scratch door) One more kissie sitter lady! Mommie’s HOME! *indicates internal rhyme

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Date: 8/22/2010 3:53:00 PM
Cool-io poem, Deb. "( giant, pink, bubble- gum, tongue licks on sitters facie!)" I can feel the wetness and smell the breath! LOL Good luck in the contest. Love you. Dane
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Date: 8/22/2010 3:42:00 PM
I think you did awesome with this, Deb. BEst of luck. A very fun poem to read. Kind of like stream of consciousness, if a dog actually has thoughts!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/22/2010 2:55:00 PM
This is quite the poem.I like it.Thank you for your comments.Hope all is well with you.
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading about the experience from the dog's perspective, Deborah. Lots of fun to read and I think you captured the dog's spirit very well! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:19:00 PM
too adorable, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:17:00 PM
wowzers energetic and when you read it escalates lol, love it. *LUV ~S.K.A.T.
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