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Personal Memories

Personal Memories Tender, tiny hands taught with strings so very, very smart... With guidance and understanding given so freely from the start... No discipline or anger shown only pure love straight from the heart... A bond between these two, the Dynamic Duo, never to be torn apart... Unblemished and so beautiful, this perfect painted portrait of family art... \ March 17, 2016 (picture #2)

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2016 10:35:00 AM

Wonderful write, Brian, congratulations on your win!!!!

Brian Davey
Date: 4/7/2016 4:46:00 AM

Thank you very much Eve

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/1/2016 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Laura's contest, Brian. Nicely done! Sandra

Brian Davey
Date: 4/7/2016 4:46:00 AM

Thank you Sandra it was an honor to do something so personal for her and to have it well received

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/31/2016 3:28:00 AM

Beautiful flow of rhymes!!! Congrats Brian, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Teddy I am happy that you enjoyed my write

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Teddy I am happy that you enjoyed my write

Balveen Cheema

Date: 3/31/2016 1:54:00 AM

Congrats on your deserving win, Brian!

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:40:00 PM

Thank you very much I really enjoyed this contest

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/31/2016 12:33:00 AM

Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Brian ..

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:39:00 PM

Thank you so much

Lu Loo

Date: 3/30/2016 9:19:00 PM

Brian, this warmed my heart immensely and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:38:00 PM

Your welcome and the best prize I could receive was in your comment because that is what this contest was about and I am so happy I got the chance to represent your family in a good way, it means the world to me that you enjoyed it so much! Thank you

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/18/2016 8:40:00 PM

Beautifully sentimental work, Brian. Flowed extremely well. I'm curious about this "dynamic duo" ... they sound like they could be a title for my nieces, who are but a year apart ...

Brian Davey
Date: 3/23/2016 4:50:00 AM

I think the world has many different Dynamic Duo's your niece's being two of them. I based this off of the pic for the contest that shows the two I've written about. Thanks again my friend

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 3/18/2016 6:52:00 AM

Lovely lines...

Brian Davey
Date: 3/18/2016 5:23:00 PM

Thank you