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Personal Heat

It is 94 degrees and mostly sunny Though my skin is like smouldering burned cookies After the fire department sprayed water on top Time is now for my personal heat Others are cool and calm while I melt into my seat Hide the scissors cause I feel like cutting off my hair Winter is for me this season Maybe I'll move to Greenland.

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Ralph Mason

Date: 9/8/2012 3:31:00 PM

Canada will work just fine! Love you poem. Warm thoughts, Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/4/2012 9:15:00 AM

You must come and stay with me a little Doris, never too hot here. - Welcome - Like your poem - and want a little more heat. The only thing I can offer is a warm hug / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2012 12:28:00 PM

Cute one..I can say that I understand ...That is not a very comfortable time.Great topic and presentation.Thanks for stopping by...Mom

Cindy Cayton

Date: 9/2/2012 4:42:00 AM

Haven't read you in awhile, I was on a bit of a personal AWOL from here for a bit. Enjoyable read as always :) take care and God bless you, my hair is almost to my bottom, and all I can do with it is braid it on the side. Never ever ride in a convertable. BF laughs cause I say I think I need a pony tail.. men think it's funny when women have so many hair problems I believe. Take good care, and God bless, Cindy

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/1/2012 8:05:00 PM

Maybe I will move to Greenland also. Can't wait for winter. Nice write

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 8:03:00 PM

Hi Doris, how are you?? How have you been..i wonder about you at times..Only cause I miss the poets who got me all into the soup... about your poem: Now I know you are my neighbor... LOL... You bake like a cookie,,, Down here in Texas.. we bake and brake quicker than eggs... I'm moving with you...ha h a..love PD

Richard Palmer

Date: 9/1/2012 6:15:00 PM

sorry about the heat,seasonal,it will soon be your time of the year again,great write Doris

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/1/2012 5:54:00 PM

You could go to England, they have pretty cool climates there...and rough winters too! Great write here, I like the Fall myself...the cooling down of the air, it just feels crisp, I love it! Great Work!!

Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/29/2021 7:54:00 AM

yes that is a good time of year. thank you.