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Periodic Table of Elements

Periodic table of elements Periodic table of elements, the true heart of chemistry, Law of periodicity clements, Mendeleev is not a history ! Bonding between two hearts, ignoring all the negatives, When breaks and rips apart, defying the electro positives, Atoms randomly disperse, Directionless, blinded and betrayed, Valencies in their course traverse, Swaying in the numbers brigade ! Written January 2nd, 2015 For contest "Periodic table of elements" by Anthony Slausen

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Date: 4/22/2017 9:34:00 PM
Very brilliant write. A perfect 7..........//with love
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Date: 9/13/2016 10:57:00 PM
Superb thoughts
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Date: 1/15/2015 5:44:00 PM
I am with Sandra on this one a fav for me too.
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Date: 1/15/2015 5:07:00 AM
Excellent! Much luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/9/2015 4:10:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, I just got to read your poem today, and found it amazing! I agree with the others...it's a winner for me. 7+Fav, Sandra
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Date: 1/8/2015 2:59:00 PM
I too would have placed it Upma, it fulfilled the requirements admirably. Light & Love
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:50:00 PM
Nice Upma, indeed a gem... Verlena
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:21:00 AM
Hi Upma, I came in search of your entry; much impressed by this write, and would have liked to see it on the winners' list. #7 I understand you must have been a good science student! // paul
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Date: 1/7/2015 5:22:00 AM
love this, a joy to read...
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Date: 1/4/2015 6:46:00 AM
good flow DR. Upma.. :)God bless and HAppy New year.. :)!
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Date: 1/3/2015 7:56:00 PM
Good entry my friend. Light & Love
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:05:00 AM
I saw this contest and think the theme is very imaginative. I wondered what a poem of the Table of Elements would look like, and this one reads very fine indeed. Best of luck in the comp.
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Date: 1/2/2015 12:32:00 PM
love your take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:17:00 AM
You remind me of Chemistry classes Upma."Valencies in their course traverse" Good luck Love-rajat
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