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Perfections1

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Perfections1

In the very first start it sounded sweet.
Cool! cool! it didn't went every day,
events unfolded as we bridged time across.
I saw it came to a perfection but was it......
Now the tides have changed,
The pretty, beautiful, and came a price
One which an angel couldn't have.
Hairs stood at ends waking every day....
See the same face at dull lights.
Kiss lips of a kind through time bedeviled me....
Waters parade the bridges at my detriments
so it's i call marriage in time
at the very fist start 'twas sweet
but a contempt view 
go for perfection and pray for redemption.....

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  1. Date: 1/4/2014 1:59:00 PM
    "Kiss lips of a kind through time bedeviled me" perfect!! Well done!!

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 11:21:00 PM
    it is awesome Ako,... LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Ako, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda

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    Date: 7/30/2013 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    H,i Linda thanks for everything and I hope to do better next time............Thanks again >>>>>Henshaw<<<<<<
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 11:37:00 PM
    This is a very beautiful poem my dear friend, Ako,. I enjoyed reading it this morning and i so love it especially the ending. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by on my poem leaving me an inspiring comments. More power to you & have a blessed wkend! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 1:47:00 PM
    Hello Ako, I am female. and thank you for the comment on my poem. It was a nice collaboration with the poet. Tim, he's a nice fellow poet... hugs your way, please post another poem... LINDA

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 7:59:00 PM
    Hi Ako, I love the go for it thought. Kiss lips of a kind through time bedeviled me... love that line and imagery... XOX~ LINDA