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        people try to be perfect
        but none of its worth it

                                       youll start being mean
                                        and youll see the thing

                                                                            you make people cry
                                                                               they dont know why
                                                                                           then youll get in a fight
                                                                                            that will cause a big fright
                                                       youll be on the groung 
                                               and theyll tell you you were crowned

dear people that read this.........dont try to be someone you arent because thats 
not you so dont try to be perfect because if you do you wont have no more 
friendships and youll look back and see all that youv done to hurt people.......

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  1. Date: 5/3/2011 9:23:00 AM
    This is a great poem, it's very true. Be yourself. None of us are perfect.