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Perfect World--Contest

Perfect World (If You Could Change The World) contest If I could change the world I really wouldn't change a thing Because a choice that makes me happy might cause other people suffering We are all the same but different Everyone has individuality So leave these matters to God and just pray spiritually Yes the world has problems Hunger, war, pain, and strife But to take away all the suffering Would remove the true meaning of life So if I could change the world I choose to leave it all the same This world Is only His creation Do you really want to play that game? 04/13/2016

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 4/24/2016 3:56:00 AM

a good poem with good morals xxxx

Brian Davey
Date: 5/21/2016 4:55:00 AM

Thank you Wendy

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/13/2016 9:44:00 AM

Like your take on this...well written. BG

Brian Davey
Date: 4/13/2016 11:53:00 AM

thank you so much Barbara I appreciate it

Sarita Milliner

Date: 4/13/2016 8:51:00 AM

Brian, I like your take on life and your creativity through this write. Good luck in the contest!!

Brian Davey
Date: 4/13/2016 11:52:00 AM

thank you so much

Jan Allison

Date: 4/13/2016 6:33:00 AM

Unique take on the theme Brian:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2016 7:05:00 AM

I often go out on a limb with my contest entries and have about 100 N/A to my name lol - you win some and lose some but the important thing is you are unleashing your creativity:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Davey
Date: 4/13/2016 7:03:00 AM

This was one of those going out on a limb things we talked of once. I know its not really what he is looking for but I think it will be the only one of its kind. Thanks for reading Jan