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Pedestal Breaking

While I watch her, an adored jewel, Flinging on with my old pal She crashes from the pedestal, Like a burst of glass As love etches death on the alley. Contest:Fallen in 25-30 Words, nette onclaud from Franco Gonza 2 December 2015 - my past girlfriend 30 words

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Date: 12/7/2015 4:29:00 PM
Hi Franco. Congratulations for your winning lyrcal verse! ;-)
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Date: 12/4/2015 9:29:00 PM
Congrats on superb win with this wonderful write Franco!
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:08:00 PM
Congratulations Franco. SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 7:02:00 PM
this is really GOOD writing, Franco. A well deserved win!!
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:12:00 PM
Easy come but not so easy to go sometimes. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/4/2015 4:23:00 PM
she really fell 'like a burst of glass', franco...sweet fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs!
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Date: 12/4/2015 3:57:00 PM
powerfully penned Franco congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2015 12:05:00 AM
Franco, Enjoyed your write. SKAT
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Date: 12/2/2015 10:03:00 AM
Well done, a very visual poem. I like this very much
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