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Peaches

Was lonely like a man who sits on a throne, Who has never felt a kiss on a collar bone. Feeling departed I found myself at a party Exploring a girl like she was an African Safari. She got me writing novels With a lustful theme, And taking entire naps without a single dream. Now when I write poems I don’t have to steal, Because the words I can feel And what I say is real. She even has me talking to myself On public transportation. Driver thinks I’m crazy, He asks me for registration. We go through the peaches and cream As though it was rehearsed. In the past it fell apart As though the peaches were cursed. After a couple years The peaches became sour; Tried to spend time together, But we counted the hours. My success came from a fear Of being nobody, Coupled with a fear Of seeing her with somebody. Now I write against time And to the tune of two clocks. The words are so important That I need a soap box. You light up the darkness That I could not handle. In my depression you were my candle. I want to end this poem, But I know your friend is not your friend. I still struggle with a hope That you and I will make amends. Now in a state of mind Where I’m doing things On the edge of scary. The pain you put me through Inspired me to be revolutionary. Pain made my words flow smooth, They seem more Veteran. It makes me smoke so much weed, My diet seems more vegetarian. Must forget about you, And all the pain you put me through. I want to revolutionize peace, So people have to hear me speak; Ideas permeating slow Like the broken window theory. Still thoughts of you make me speculate On where my mind was at When your words carried so much weight. My life is at the age Where I can truly understand That love is women’s revenge on man. Love became a game so cut throat, It often had me sweating In a desert with a coat. It had me in the club, With a soar throat and singing the blues. I sung about how reality Is often the bearer of bad news. Like a chore I would often schedule time to ignore you. Like a child I had to grow up To realize how much I adored you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/12/2016 8:51:00 AM
This is like a story we so often hear and live. Love, this emotion we cannot fathom. Good poem.
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Date: 10/10/2016 5:29:00 AM
Love hurts, eh fella? But out of pain comes growth. Keep growing and keep writing. Nice poem, strong rhythm, plenty raw emotion. Like
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Ty Okon
Date: 10/10/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Tony, appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. It really helps me grow as a writer. www.ukotyrawnokon.com
Date: 10/7/2016 11:50:00 PM
Ty okon, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/7/2016 8:19:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 10/6/2016 2:11:00 PM
Ty Okon, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/6/2016 2:06:00 PM
Hello TY,I want to say that I enjoyed reading your poetry. Well done.
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Ty Okon
Date: 10/10/2016 2:22:00 PM
Thank you Darlene, really appreciate it. www.ukotyrawnokon.com

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