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Peaceful View

Tranquil slapping waves, The cool air off the ocean; A soft gentle breeze.

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Date: 1/5/2010 9:15:00 AM

Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James

Date: 1/4/2010 12:12:00 PM

Beautiful use of imagery. Enjoyed the view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Date: 1/4/2010 3:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Steve. May you have may more. Love, Carol

Date: 9/29/2009 12:10:00 PM

Steven, congratulations on making the first round of the contest, best of luck...Raul

Date: 9/25/2009 3:15:00 PM

Yes, indeed a peaceful view. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Date: 9/24/2009 3:53:00 PM

Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia

Date: 9/24/2009 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Steve. Love, Carol

Date: 12/16/2008 5:12:00 PM

I have been by the ocean and it is beautiful...........nice poem

Date: 12/14/2008 11:40:00 AM

Great haiku, I like writing haiku's. If you get a chance check mine out. DN

Date: 12/14/2008 11:22:00 AM

Wow, this is a stunning haiku. love the scene you painted here. I can close my eyes and imagine this.

Date: 12/14/2008 8:07:00 AM

Just finished looking at your work which somehow I've missed. You are a master of the short form. This is lovely, I want to be there!BG

Date: 12/14/2008 6:15:00 AM

Wow. Extremely inviting. Well done! Love, Shar

Date: 12/14/2008 12:20:00 AM

This also is a beautiful scene, nicely written. You are a painter of words my friend...Raul