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Paved Jungle

We are living in such a paved jungle! There are miles of concrete and sidewalks There are skylights and many skyscrapers, but we really have to pay attention! At any corner are waiting: snakes, lions and tigers. Oh poor walker, can't really enjoy peace and hope ... It is just the pursuit of happiness! It's just a struggle for better! There is just one solution to this crisis, to eradicate the beasts of our society and then transform it in a paved garden. Doing so, the peace and hope will settle in forever. by Florin Andronic 3/25/2015

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Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/6/2015 7:29:00 PM

Florin, this is a great piece. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Florin Andronic
Date: 4/12/2015 6:05:00 PM

thanks Cynthia

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 10:00:00 PM

I always come back to view my replies.... thank you :) LINDA

Florin Andronic
Date: 3/29/2015 11:48:00 PM

so nice of you :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 12:00:00 PM

Hello Florin, once again... I am delight to support your poems. Thank you once again for the reply on my comemnt.. PD

Florin Andronic
Date: 3/29/2015 1:53:00 PM

:) anytime

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2015 9:45:00 AM

- A small greeting and warm welcome, Florin :) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)

Florin Andronic
Date: 3/29/2015 1:54:00 PM

thanks Anne

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2015 11:00:00 PM

Florin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Florin Andronic
Date: 3/27/2015 11:12:00 PM

thanks for stopping by thanks for support :)

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2015 12:30:00 PM

Florin, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Florin Andronic
Date: 3/26/2015 12:39:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, thanks for welcome :)

Paul Schneiter

Date: 3/25/2015 11:44:00 PM

Florin, there is a compelling message in this poem for all of us. Thank you for sharing it. I hope you will write some more poems.

Florin Andronic
Date: 3/25/2015 11:46:00 PM

thanks, working on it :)