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Patting My Back

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Patting My Back

My hands were
Alone that
Patted my back 

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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:52:00 PM
    A wonderful haiku, i am glad you are proud of yourself.. take care..pd

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:04:00 AM
    hahaha, cute way to express this thought. Just had to check out a haiku of yours before I go offline.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/3/2012 6:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea. Try all the genres I have written to give me benefit of your observations. Sharing this Haiku on Poetrysoup has made so many hands pat my back
  1. Date: 6/26/2012 7:32:00 AM
    I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Mohammad. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/3/2012 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I mean every word of my praise, Carol. Your absence was a loss to your readers. I hope you will make it up soon.
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 2:20:00 AM
    What a nice way to recognize your accomplishments! I believe you know yourself better than anybody else. I love the deep thought behind your Haiku. Your kind comments inspire this humble brain to think more and keep writing. Dalila

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/3/2012 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your uplifting comment, Dalila. With all of you patting my back over this Haiku I am feeling adequately redeemed. I am grateful
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 7:50:00 AM
    I'm patting you on the back too Mohammed, friends need to be appreciated. Thank you for your support with my book and the explanation of seasons where you live, Those things are interesting to know. Luv, Lizzie.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 2/4/2012 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for visiting my Haiku for the second time. I am grateful to you for your comments.Lizzie -Mohammad
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 5:55:00 AM
    Nice Haiku Sometimes you have to credit yourself if others do not

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 2/4/2012 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your uplifting comments, Kevin. How right you are when you say "You have to credit yourself if others do not". I pat your back. Regards. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 2/1/2012 7:13:00 PM
    great haiku sir, i can relate to this. simple but so full of meaning.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 2/4/2012 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Mia for sending my Haiku the basket full of praise. I gratefully acknowledge. Love. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:27:00 PM
    Good you can do that, a pat on the back makes it all worthwhile. Good to see you again my friend. Hope all is well with you.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/27/2012 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your encouraging comments and for your good wishes, Elizabeth. You are such a good soul. God Bless you.
  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:41:00 AM
    Wonderful Haiku. Sometimes we have to give ourselves credit/support because no one else will. Good message. Best, Don

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/26/2012 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your encouraging comments, Don. You have perceived the inner meaning of the Haiku. It is commendable. Regards. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 1/25/2012 7:41:00 AM
    I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Mohammad. Love, Carol

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/26/2012 11:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am glad you enjoyed reading my Haiku, Carol. Thanks for your comments. Out of my latest posts you appear to have read this one only. I would like your comments on others as well so as to improve. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 1/24/2012 10:35:00 AM
    Well done in eight words Mohammad!oxox love Anne-Lise

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/24/2012 11:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your kind comments, Anne. You are so kind, Love. -Mohammad